Once upon a time,there was a man named lucky.He is very Lucky.One day.his mom bought a novel,which he had been looking for-ward to.That morning,he bought the book and left for school.As saying goodbye to his mother,a giant man-eating flower fell from the balcony,and the flower could almost hit Lucky's head. But,Lucky was really lucky.He wasn't hit by the flower.And
he kept walking.The novel was so exciting that he couldn't see a bus speeding through the street.He was almost crushed by the car,but fortunatly,he wasn't.He finally arrived at the bus stop, and then the bus came.So he got on the bus and kept reading the interesting novel.When the bus arried at the railway,a train passed by at a horrible speed.The bus driver stepped on the brake,and......nothing happened!Everyone wass creaming, but Lucky didn't hear that because he was concentrating on his reading.At last,he arrived at the classroom.At the moment he sat down,a fire took place,he just felt hot because the book was too interesting.He was rescued.He was safe and sound.The president gave him a medal:"The Luckiest Mon in the World."
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